Post by sallyg on Dec 20, 2006 13:32:38 GMT -8
Jennifer & Richard
DL
-Doesn't look like they're on the same space; could be due to contrast ratio
-Eyes don't match up
-The lighting on her shoulder is off
2nd Project
-Too much rim light; should have light on the bottom side of the tree
-The leaves are a litte bit saturated
-The lightining is not affecting the posts; the grass around changes but not the posts
-A distant light for the lightining would work better
Luis & Tony
UFO
-UFO hides on top the christmas tree and should be offscreen
-Too much noise; no "crawlies"; make sure it matches the building near it
-"Animation really does blow"
Bruce & Luke
GS
-Looks very blurry
-Good job
-Just a little bit too blurry on the arm
Jeet & Joy
UFO
-Needed to remove more of the "blue"
-Shake was too big; it wouldn't move in a circular shape.
-Shadow looks good
-The color is a little bizzare
-Would like to see more reflection in the front of the craft
Christian & Bruce
UFO
-Use frame blending in AE
-Box was left in the shot
-Changes the charcoal colored shadow to blue
-Much better
Juan[]
Noir
-Looks good
UFO
-Did a great job on that
-A little dark
-Should see some shadow about midtone on the upper half of the craft
-The way the craft is set-up, it looks like the craft is tilted towards the viewer. We should be able to see more of the underside of the craft.
Eun Kyung
-Pretty low res
-Needs to construct the shadow plane; looks weird because the shadow is running through what would be trees
-A good start
-Theres a really bright light on top; not sure where that came from
Luke
UFO
-Pretty good
-You might want to cheat a shadow in there
-Scale might be small
-Timecode should be in frames
-Lighting is pretty good
DL
-Doesn't look like they're on the same space; could be due to contrast ratio
-Eyes don't match up
-The lighting on her shoulder is off
2nd Project
-Too much rim light; should have light on the bottom side of the tree
-The leaves are a litte bit saturated
-The lightining is not affecting the posts; the grass around changes but not the posts
-A distant light for the lightining would work better
Luis & Tony
UFO
-UFO hides on top the christmas tree and should be offscreen
-Too much noise; no "crawlies"; make sure it matches the building near it
-"Animation really does blow"
Bruce & Luke
GS
-Looks very blurry
-Good job
-Just a little bit too blurry on the arm
Jeet & Joy
UFO
-Needed to remove more of the "blue"
-Shake was too big; it wouldn't move in a circular shape.
-Shadow looks good
-The color is a little bizzare
-Would like to see more reflection in the front of the craft
Christian & Bruce
UFO
-Use frame blending in AE
-Box was left in the shot
-Changes the charcoal colored shadow to blue
-Much better
Juan[]
Noir
-Looks good
UFO
-Did a great job on that
-A little dark
-Should see some shadow about midtone on the upper half of the craft
-The way the craft is set-up, it looks like the craft is tilted towards the viewer. We should be able to see more of the underside of the craft.
Eun Kyung
-Pretty low res
-Needs to construct the shadow plane; looks weird because the shadow is running through what would be trees
-A good start
-Theres a really bright light on top; not sure where that came from
Luke
UFO
-Pretty good
-You might want to cheat a shadow in there
-Scale might be small
-Timecode should be in frames
-Lighting is pretty good